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‘सृजन संवाद’ गोष्ठी में अजय मेहताब की कहानी एवं कहानी कहने पर फ़िल्म प्रदर्शन

जमशेदपुर में एक संस्था है ‘सृजन संवाद‘, जो नियमित रूप से साहित्यिक गोष्ठी करती है और हर बार कुछ विविध करती है. वरिष्ठ लेखिका विजय शर्मा की रपट- मॉडरेटर

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कहानी पाठ से पूर्व डॉ. विजय शर्मा ने नीला वेंकटरामन की बनाई फ़िल्म ‘लिविंग स्टोरीज, स्टोरीज टेलिंग ट्रेडिशन्स ऑफ़ इंडिया’ दिखाई। फ़िल्म भारत के विभिन्न प्रदेशों की कहानी कहने की कला को प्रदर्शित करती है। कहीं यह कथकलि के रूप में है तो कहीं बाउल के रूप में, यक्षगान और पंडवानी भी इसी की कड़ी है और कलमकारी भी। कहानी कहने की परम्परा पर चीमामांडा, अशोक बाजपेयी, गीता हरिहरन, विलियम डालरिम्पल, रस्किन बॉन्ड, गुरुचरण दास, के सचिदानंदन, मुज्जफ़र अली आदि देशी-विदेशी साहित्यकारों ने अपने विचार रखे। फ़िल्म संदेश देती है कि एक कहानी कई तरह से कही जा सकती है। कहानी हमारे अस्तित्व से जुड़ी होती है यह संस्कृति का हिस्सा होती है।

ऐसी साहित्यिक गोष्ठियाँ हमें साहित्य में गहरे उतरने में सहायक होती हैं। धन्यवाद ज्ञापन विजय शर्मा ने किया। ‘सृजन संवाद’ की अगली गोष्ठी १० सितंबर को होनी तय हुई है।

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